Angel of Death

Wow this was beautiful and entertaining. I have to say that your title really caught my eye which is always a big thumbs up when writing. Your characters were very ...

As always I am blown away by your poetry. You should really think about publishing a poetry book or something because you're amazing. Your poems are short but they are ...

Okay I know this is a bit weird but I just wrote it because I had something in my head all day and it was killing me and I thought...hey ...

Kylan is that you? Really seriously...you're back? Where have you been? OMG!! I haven't any of your work in a long long long time and...give me a minute...ok Poetry? Idealogical ...

Bravo, this was brilliant!! It's short but it sends a very strong message and it makes you think. I see no grammatical all in all I thought this was well ...

Breathe In Ok, ok this was really intense. I felt that I was rushed into a world of slipping and falling; confusion. Sometimes this would be bad but here its ...

I love this picture. Its unique but it stays true to the Mr. Rochester that we all know and love. I especially love the way the eyes look over to ...

Artemis "Fayne? You're still there?" I asked, dumbly. Of course I could sense him there, but I thought that he had left for some reason. Maybe my voice did sound ...

7/10 I like the tempo and the beat of that song

Hey BBB!!! I have to make reading some of your work apart of my daily schedule because its like going to the movies! I love watching thrillers and mysteries, where ...

Artemis Sky could feel I was in her mind, I could tell by the frustrated expression her face. Shaking my head, I tried ridding my mind of the thoughts that ...

This seems to be a problem everywhere but I might be able to help you. Since you know the characters outline them. Map out their thoughts, feelings, interests etc. Treat ...

Wow this was wonderful. You captured so many emotions about change and it had rhythm, and perfect structure. I loved this. Now I know this is not much but this ...

Forbidden Violets By Angel of Death Chapter 1-The Chosen Pt. 2 I dreamed of my mother that night. Her easy smile shining behind my eyelids. She was dancing with the ...

real smoothe Jig :lol: